This product is poorly written and barely comprehensible. The sheer number of grammatical errors and shoddy writing make the story difficult to follow, which is unfortunate as the product is about 80% story.
The story itself, from what I can make of it, is actually pretty good, if somewhat predictable. The plot hinges on the interactions of the players with a variety of non-player characters, who all have decent stories and personalities. While they could stand to be fleshed out a bit more, it is not a big issue for a skilled storyteller.
If you have the wherewithal to decipher the writing, this adventure can be a welcome change of pace from action-heavy games. Definitely for simulationist role-players.