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I am flicking through the product now and two main points are immediately apparent within moments of looking through the pdf:
1) as has already been mentioned in the other review, the headers and the font used make it almost impossible to read, making the various passages difficult to follow until you finally can work out by process of logic what really should ahve been clear from the heading
2) Most problematic however, is the layout. There are no table of contents or index and the layout looks more of a stream of consciousness than any sprt of logical design. You say you are working on a revised edition and this would be most welcomed. I cannot say whether your game system is actually a good or bad one because the terrible layout and presentation make it impossible to actually know what is going on. Please do a proper table of contents and index for your revision so people can find what they need to look for quickly and easily.
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