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The good: I enjoyed the content of the package. The package lays out several NPCs and several interesting plot hooks. I really enjoyed a strong female villain who is intelligent and ruthless.
The bad: The font and the layout really detract from the overall product. The font mimics handwriting, which goes along with the post-apoc feel of the product, but, it makes the product look sloppy and deters a quick skim. Also, I found the layout and organization to be lacking. For example, when twists are listed, it took me a second to realize that not all of the twists were linear, but, instead, different options to choose from. Also, needs a second set of eyes to edit it for typos.
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