This adventure is interesting and of course it has some of bonuses, but the whole idea is pretty stupid go A than go B, than back to A.

What I liked:

• the Storm!
• some significant NPCs, which interacted with a party
• adventure atmosphere, for example, those rivers which change directions and some more.
• dungeon is pretty plain, so it doesn't require for a party to spent a year there.

What I disliked:

• Character motiviation. I needed some imagination to create a normal hooks for a party
• Stupid skips - "and now return back" So this is not an complete adventure, but this is a "draft wireframe" for creating your own adventure. Pay attention, that you will need to adapt and convert this adventure to fit your party well.

The adventure itself is nothing more than move from a to b then from b to a solve the dungeong and go to a and save the world. The trip from one location to antoher are left to the DM this means that you have to prepare a lot of stuff. The dungeon map is not so clear and the way back to the starting location at the end of the adventure is: "Now the PG should go back" to arrive in that location the use before 2 chapter of the adventure. In order to gave my players a good adventure i added 100 pages of sub quest, information, PNG and moster that simply the adventure leave empty (like the trip back to Lave or the enviroment of the cities the PC find during the journey). A think that when a master buy an adventure was only to avoid the time in writing the adventure, 100 hundred add on pages are too much.