I really enjoy the content.
The layout could be improved -- character creation is spread out and requires flipping back and forth as well as discovering several near-hidden bits tucked away.
Some bits of art seem to be damaged or obscured (layer issue?).
The Table of Contents and searching (Mac OS 10.6.x, Preview app) ... is really not good. The ToC is nested down three levels of disclosure triangles. Clicking on any item in the ToC does not take you to that section. Seems like a rush job was done here. Thumbs down.